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[Aiko87]

Witam, mam do zrobienia taką krótką wypowiedź z wadami i zaletami gier komputerowych. Byłabym wdzięczna za sprawdzenie:)
Miałabym jeszcze jedną prośbę... Czy ktoś z Was wie może, czy można znaleźć w necie taki test na uzależnienie od gier komputerowych? Najlepiej po angielsku.

"More than 10 (ten) millions people play in World of Warcraft nowadays. The creators of Call of duty Modern Warfare 2 earned over 1 (one) billion dollars. Producers must expend about a few million dollars and something to advertising in order to release a good computer game.
At present computer games are a huge business which is comparing to productions of Hollywood.
I would like to tell you about advantages and disadvantages of computer games, which became a part of our lifes. How do they influence to people? Why they are so popular? I try to answer this questions.
Some of computer games increase perceptiveness, reflex and imagination. Adventure games enlarge skill of logical thinking, strategic games teach skill of strategic thinking, simulative games teach reflex.
On the other hand, computer games are making addicted. That kind of person likes to be in its own, closed room. He or she can’t do anything else except playing computer games. When he or she doesn’t play then feels lonely and is overcome by despair.
Many computer games increase knowledge through entertainment. Games are teaching independence and how to cope in new situations. If you make a mistake in a game and your character die or lose its chance for a good ending, you can always try again until you make it.
A disadvantage of computer games is that they cause aggression. People, who are playing in computer games too much, has many problems with starting conversations with other people and making friendships. They can’t behave in society.
To sum up, are the computer games good or bad? This is difficult question to answer. Computer games are great entertainment, which are teaching us too. On the other hand we can easily addicted and close from the world. The real world is much more beautiful than virtual world.
I personally think that we should good manage time and separate fiction and reality. I think that if we are careful, computer games become to us pleasure, but not unfortunate.
Thanks for listening!"

[Ayra]

Nowadays more than 10 (ten) millions people play World of Warcraft. The creators of Call of duty Modern Warfare 2 earned over 1 (one) billion dollars. Producers must expend about a few million dollars and something to advertising in order to release a good computer game. - nie rozumiem zdania kompletnie
At present computer games are a huge business which is compared to productions of Hollywood.
I would like to tell you about advantages and disadvantages of computer games, which became a part of our lifes. How do they influence to people? Why they are so popular? I try to answer this questions. - rozumiem, ze wzorujesz nie na polskiej formie rozprawki, ale jakoś średnio mi to pasuje do formalnej czy nawet półformalnej wypowiedzi.
Some of computer games increase perceptiveness, reflex and imagination. Adventure games enlarge skill of logical thinking, strategic games teach skill of strategic thinking, simulative games teach reflex. - można uczyć refleksu? raczej tutaj bardziej pasowało by increase albo hmm.. build up, develop może?
On the other hand, computer games are addictive. That kind of person (raczej a person who plays games a lot czy coś w ten deseń, bo piszesz, taki rodzaj osoby, a nie wiadomo o jaki rodzaj konkretnie Ci chodzi) likes to be alone, closed room. He or she can’t do anything else except playing computer games. When he or she doesn’t play then feels lonely and is overcame by despair.
Many computer games increase knowledge through entertainment. Games are teaching independence and how to handle new situations. If you make a mistake in a game and your character die or lose its chance for a good ending, you can always try again until you make it.
A disadvantage of computer games is that they cause aggression. People who are playing computer games too much have many problems with starting conversations with other people and making friendships. They can’t behave in society.
To sum up, are the computer games good or bad? This is difficult question to answer. Computer games are great entertainment, in addition to that, they may teach us lot of things. On the other hand we can easily become addicted and closed from the world. The real world is much more beautiful than virtual world.
I personally think that we should manage time caregully and separate fiction and reality. I think that if we are careful, computer games become pleasure to us, but not unfortunate. - niekoniecznie wiem co chciałaś tu przekazać.
Thanks for listening!"

Tyle ode mnie. Tak na szybko i w sumie nie wiem czy czegoś gdzieś nie pomyliłam, może później jeszcze zajrzę.

[Aiko87]

Bardzo dziękuję za pomoc:)

[Ayra]

1. In order to release a good game, producers spend a few millions dollars on production alone and much more on the advertising.
2. I think that if we are careful, computer games may become pleasure to us and they won't do any harm.

Nie tłumaczyłam słowo w słowo, bo tak nie potrafię Ale sensy zdań są zachowane.
Gramatycznie raczej brzmi, ale jeśli to ma być wypowiedź formalna lub półformalna, to musisz rozbić skróty, np. nie don't tylko do not i ogólnie może troszkę się pobawić wszystkimi however, moreover itp.... ale to drugie to akurat wyższa szkoła jazdy

[Aiko87]

Wprowadziłam jeszcze kilka dodatkowych zdań. Byłabym wdzięczna za rzut okiem na to:P

"More than ten millions people play in World of Warcraft nowadays. The creators of Call of Duty Modern Warfare the second earned over one billion dollars. In order to release a good game, producers spend a few millions dollars on production alone and much more on the advertising.
At present computer games are a huge business which is comparing to productions of Hollywood.
I would like to tell you about advantages and disadvantages of computer games, which became a part of our lifes. How do they influence to people? Why they are so popular? I try to answer this questions.
Some of computer games increase perceptiveness, reflex and imagination. Adventure games enlarge skill of logical thinking, strategic games teach skill of strategic thinking, simulative games develop reflex.
I think that a game called “The sims” is a good example. When we have to build a house for a sim, we are training our imagination. We must care for every character and we develop our skill of management.
Especially, we must know what we buy and what don’t buy, because our money is limited.
On the other hand, computer games are making addictive.
We don’t noticed when one hour that we playing change in five or ten hours for a day. The person who plays games a lot likes to be alone, closed room. He or she can’t do anything else except playing computer games. When he or she doesn’t play then feels lonely and is overcome by despair.
The people who are addicted sometimes dying. For example, some boy doesn’t eat, drink and sleep over eighty-four hours. He’s just playing. And that was his last game. This is a warning for all people who playing computer games.
Many computer games increase knowledge through entertainment. Games are teaching independence and how to handle new situations. If you make a mistake in a game and your character die or lose its chance for a good ending, you can always try again until you make it.
A disadvantage of computer games is that they cause aggression.
We believe if an imaginary character can something then we can do the same. Unfortunately, we are wrong. Result of this thinking is that we are fighting with other people. For example, some ten years old boy likes playing a game called “Pokemon”. When he plays in that game with his friend, he set friend on fire. Boy die some time later.
People, who are playing in computer games too much, has many problems with starting conversations with other people and making friendships. They can’t behave in society.
To sum up, are the computer games good or bad? This is difficult question to answer. Computer games are great entertainment, in addition to that, they may teach us lot of things.
A music, graphics, effects are some kind of art. Producer of a game must have large knowledge, imagination and creativity.
On the other hand we can easily become addicted and closed from the world.
I personally think that we should good manage time and separate fiction and reality. I think that if we are careful, computer games may become pleasure to us and they won't do any harm.
Thanks for listening!"

[Ayra]

Especially, we have to know what to buy and what not to buy, because our money is limited.

We don’t notice when one hour change in five or ten hours of playing daily.

The people who are addicted may die. For example, a boy didn’t eat, drink and sleep for over eighty-four hours. He’s playing. And that was his last game. This is a warning for all people who play computer games.

We believe that if an imaginary character can do something then we can do the same. Unfortunately, we are wrong. In the result we fight with other people. For example, a ten years old boy likes playing a game called “Pokemon”. When he plays that game with his friend, he set his friend on fire. That boy (ale tu bym sugerowała, zeby zaznaczyc dokłądniej, o którego chłopca Ci chodzi - czy boy who set the fire, czy boy who was set on fire) died some time later.

Music, graphics and effects are some kind of art. Producer of a game must have large knowledge, imagination and creativity.

To by chyba było tyle... Tylko ostrzegam - mogłam coś pominąć lub niechcący przekręcić, sama nadal się uczę

[Aiko87]

Ayra, bardzo ci dziękuję:)

[Aiko87]

Otóż wynikły jeszcze jedne problemy z tłumaczeniem. Tym razem już ostatnie. Mam taki test: Czy jesteś uzależniony od gier komputerowych? Tylko 10 pytań bez odpowiedzi. Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie:)

Test: Do you addicted of computer games

1.You buy or download from the Internet a game per week.
2.You are working only to have money on a computer game.
3.You buy or download computer games which you don’t play over than five times.
4.You don’t have time to spend free time with your family or friends.
5.When you don’t play computer games, you are reading or thinking about them.
6.You don’t watch television.
7.You don’t eat healthy because you are playing games.
8.You have problems where put your collection of games.
9.You don’t know to talk about with people who don’t play games.
10.You are cleaning only because of productivity of your personal computer.

Po polsku:
1) Ściągasz/kupujesz przynajmniej jedną grę tygodniowo
2) Pracujesz tylko po to, żeby mieć kasę na gry
3) Kupujesz/ściągasz gry, w które nie zagrasz więcej niż pięć razy
4) Masz problem z poświęcaniem czasu przeznaczonego na granie dla innych osób (partnera/rodziny)
5) Kiedy nie możesz grać, to przynajmniej czytasz/myślisz o grach
6) Nie oglądasz telewizji.
7) Źle się odżywiasz ze względu na granie
8) Masz problemy z miejscem na swoją kolekcję gier
9) Nie masz o czym rozmawiać z ludźmi, którzy nie grają
10) Odkurzasz pokój tylko ze względu na wydajność Twojego sprzętu

[Ayra]

ARE you addicted TO

2. You are working only to have money for a computer game

3. You buy or download computer games which you don’t play more than five times

4. You don’t have time to spend with your family or friends.

8. You have problems with finding place for your computer games collection.

9. You don’t know what to talk about with people who don’t play games.

10. You clean your room only because of your personal computer's performance.

Chyba tyle.

[Aiko87]

Ayra, Jeszcze raz dziękuję za pomoc